JujubeLock's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[LL Group Three]

This repeats the more clustered look of the group two drawing, but I think it comes together better. It comes off as a clustered conversational setting as opposed to a photographic setting, but with the tiering it appears people are more drawn in to the conversation. It has a bit more symmetry and balance, particularly by using the two, shall we say more "robust" characters to define the borders. While Sunshine is in the back, its like he's trying to jump into the conversation as opposed to being outside of it. It does have the more complexly designed characters clustered together, but I think it works for this piece as the left hand characters seem to be visually drawn to those characters suggesting they are the focus of the conversation.

LipLawk responds:

Yet another very good review. Do you write for a living? :)

Do you want to know what I'm most proud of with these three group pictures? Group one's thumbnail has one lock on it... group two has two... and group three has three. Did you notice? ;)

[LL Group Two]

A good piece but a very different appearance from the group one picture. It doesn't have the same symmetry and appears to be a bit more clustered than photographic. I think the overall concept works, but with the tiering it looks as if Alien Lock and the Flaming Trash Lock(?) our outside the group.

LipLawk responds:

Yeah, it's a bit clustered. Won't deny it. You write very good reviews, Jujube. :)

And that's Flaming paper Cup... not Flaming Trash, though I made the same mistake myself.

[LL Group One]

I like the overall arrangement and coloration of the piece. There are details that draw the viewer to each individual lock character without making any character overbearing. They all appear to be balanced on the invisible floor and tier out appropriately.

LipLawk responds:

A very professional review... thank you, Jujube. :)